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Monday, December 2, 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi daniel
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in the becaie full back ground because it is bright.
I leant about you mum mum's name because it is a good name.
Can you put in more d+l in your story.
Kepp Going
From Francis
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you sharing your writing on your blog. It sounds like you had a wonderful time at the Groynes. You have done a great job describing how cold the water was by telling the reader that it was like the North Pole. Did you go over the big bridge? Next time it would be great if you could include more details about what else was at the Groynes.
Keep up the great writing.
Miss Satherley
Hi daniel i like how you do good writing and detail i hope you make more stuff on your blog your really good at writing From Blake
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