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Monday, December 2, 2019

lorde



slj. this is my blog post about cyber smart. and I am doing summer learning journey the end
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 3, 2019 at 9:29 AM

    Hi Daniel
    I like how you put in detail about Lord
    I also like how you put the numbers so we can know which one which
    I think you need to put in a diffraction color
    From Robert

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  2. AnonymousDecember 3, 2019 at 10:50 AM

    Hi Daniel
    I like how you described one person and how you told me when it happened and how it happened. Did you get any information about how old she was as a teenager like was she 16? Can you please do space so I can see what it really says. Does Lorde still sing? or has she stop singing? From RM 3 STB Xavier

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  3. Mikey SLJDecember 9, 2019 at 1:24 PM

    Kia ora Daniel!

    My name is Mikey. I'm a part of the Summer Learning Journey team and I'll be commenting on some of your blog posts this summer. It's great to see that you've made a start on the teaser week activities - well done! :)

    I really like the way you've chosen to display your information about Lorde. One of the other bloggers in the Summer Learning Journey team actually went to school with her! Isn't that cool? Do you like her music? What would you say is your favourite song of her's?

    Just a quick tip for your next post. Be mindful of the colour choice of your fonts and backgrounds - some colours are harder to see than others and it makes it tricky for the reader to read what you've written. Other than that, amazing work! :)

    I can't wait to read more posts from you soon. Have a lovely day, Daniel.

    Talk soon,

    Mikey :)

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  4. Miss RaderApril 15, 2020 at 12:46 PM

    Hi Daniel
    I like how you picked Lorde she is a great musician. Do you like any of her songs?? Do you know where Takapuna is or been there??
    Just for next time can you think about your fonts and background colour as I found it hard to read.
    Keep up the good work and look forward in reading more blogs from you.
    From Miss Rader

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